Feedback - Miss Spencer

This is an extremely detailed and accomplished piece of research and analysis Jake.  You have clearly picked out many conventions of the genre and commented on them; this will help when planning your own film. You have gone into incredible detail and discussed all of the DISTINCT elements, showing a real understanding of the taks and the genre. This work would be a level 3/4 border, in order to move on effectively and make the best use of your time I would suggest the following:

• You don't need to go through the scene shot by shot, although thyis hs lead to detailed analysis I think you can still acheive detail by talking about the opening in more general terms giving lots of good examples of points you want to make.
• Add some more screen shots to illustrate your points and break up the dense text.
• You should have done four analysis by now, we can arrange some catch up time over half term in order to keep you up to date with your work.