You have done some detailed analysis of the films you have chosen Jake, and there are many examples of times when you have thought about the conventions and the effect of camera movement/ angles/ sound on the audience. I would like to see more discussion of editing and also mention of Iconography and character more.
I will talk this through with you in class.
Your work is at a level 2/3 border, in order to improve you need to move away from describing scene by scene and get more into analysing elements of the opening.
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